Könntet ihr mir helfen und diese Charakterisierung verbessern?
The character I would like to introduce is Paul one of the characters from the dialogue “Money“.
Paul is about a nineteen year old boy. He has a sister, who works in a Saturday Job. His father Brian is a chief foreman and his mother a housewife. Paul has got plenty of spare time, but no money to enjoy it with. The sister Jo advises that, he also find a saturday job like herself, to earn money for his private matter. But he doesn't agree with this idea, because he said that the employer prefer girls, because of that he doens't make the effort. His father and mother see him as bone idle. John would like to get more pocket money from his father for his spare time, but it comes to a dispute between his parents. His father says that he also should be self-employed as himself at his age. But John always finds excuses, about the proposals.
John is a altricial like many other adolescents . He wants to be dependent on his parents and chill out of all spare times to doing nothing.
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