Da ich gerade mein Englisch verbessern will, lese ich diverse Artikel, die ich dann versuche in einigen kurzen Sätzen zusammenzufassen und anschließend verfasse ich ein Kommentar dazu.
Ich würde mich sehr freuen, wenn jemand einen kurzen Blick darauf werfen könnte,
und mich so auf Fehler aufmerksam macht
Healthy school lunch
More and more schools in the United States want to make school lunches more nutritional.They offer more whole-grain products, more vegetables and food which contains less salt. Unfortunately, these new alternatives don’t appeal at the pupils, the new food is „disgusting“ for them. To establish these new changes, it will be necessary to start a healthy-food training at home, which means the whole family should change their eating habits.
Commentary
This Commentary refers to an article, which appears on the 22th of February 2011, at the „Los Angeles Times“.
In my opinion it is very important to improve the quality of school lunches. It is indisputable that a balanced nutrition has a lot of positive effects, for example it can upgrade the concentration. Of course, it is a long way from the idea to the realisation. I think it would be better, if schools would not advertise healthy food as „healthy food“.
Coca Cola and ChickenMcNuggets are „cool“, vegetables and whole-grain products are not. There are a lot of ways to make healthy food more attraktiv for pupils. It is possible to make milkshakes from bananas whithout sugar, broccoli-nuggets, or to mix up whole-grain pasta with usual „white“ pasta, so it would not be a completly new taste and the pupils can slowly get used to a new way of eating.
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! Aber ich habe ein paar andere Vorschläge als sie, also wollen wir mal vergleichen... Beste Grüße auf die Insel!!! Ohja, und Ort vor Zeit! Gut aufgepasst, Keswick!
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