Bitte mal drüber-korrigieren, Danke!

[Snake787]

Hallo ich hab hier ein paar Sätze bei denen ich wissen sollte ob diese so grammatikalisch in Ordnung wären, Vielen Dank für eure Mühe!

1.
- The vandalism are reduced by 50-60% since the installation of approx 500 surveillance cameras in basements and laundry facilities
- Surveillance cameras can be help to find a thief who has stolen a bike from a basement.
- Surveillance by cameras have be helped, that residents anymore don’t drop garbage in unauthorized places.


2.
Surveillance cameras can avoid vandalism and consequently the cost of vandalism, too.
And so the installation by surveillance cameras pays off.


3.
The surveillance camera solution was installed by AC Sikring. Because they have extensive experience with similar installations and they had installed surveillance cameras in several institutions and schools.


4.
Every surveillance camera is connected with a local server that store the recording. For maximum security, the local server communicates automatically with a central server.
The recording can be viewed by authorized persons.
All what they are need is a password and any PC to connected to the internet. On a simple way he can print the recordings on a picture or exported to a DVD.


5.
It makes sense to installations surveillance cameras on railway stations, because armed raids on people are increasing.
Other sensible places are on the motorway. So the police can see a jam on the motorway an can warning other drivers.
Furthermore it make it sense in department stores to frighten wrongdoers away.

[Keswick (Contributor)]

Hallo ich hab hier ein paar Sätze bei denen ich wissen sollte ob diese so grammatikalisch in Ordnung wären, Vielen Dank für eure Mühe!

1.
- The Vandalism has reduced by 50-60% since the installation of approximately 500 surveillance cameras in basements and laundry facilities
- Surveillance cameras can be of help in finding a thief who has stolen a bike from a basement.
- Surveillance by cameras have be helped to make sure that residents don’t litter in unauthorized places anymore.


2.
Surveillance cameras can avoid vandalism and consequently the cost of vandalism, too.
And so the installation of surveillance cameras pays off.


3.
The surveillance camera solution was installed by AC Sikring because of their extensive experience with similar installations for example installed surveillance cameras in several institutions and schools.


4.
Each surveillance camera is connected to a local server that stores the recording. For maximum security, the local server communicates automatically with a central server.
The recording can be viewed by authorized persons.
All what they are need to do this is a password and any PC to connect to the internet. They can simply can print the recordings on a picture or export them onto a DVD.


5.
It makes sense to install surveillance cameras on railway stations, because armed raids on people are increasing.
Other sensible places are on the motorway. This way the police can see a traffic jam (ganz wichtig: TRAFFIC JAM, sonst sieht die Polizei naemlich Marmelade ) on the motorway and can warn other drivers.
Furthermore it make it sense in department stores to scare of wrongdoers.

Snake du musst dir bitte unbedingt die englische Grammatik ansehen, denn da liegen deine Hauptprobleme. Du springst in den Zeiten. Ausserdem tendierst du dazu statt Verben einfach die nachgeschlagenen Nomen zu verwenden.

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hallo ich hab hier ein paar Sätze bei denen ich wissen sollte ob diese so grammatikalisch in Ordnung wären, Vielen Dank für eure Mühe!

Darf ich nochmal drüber schauen, mir sind ein paar Sachen aufgefallen...

1.
- The Vandalism has reduced/decreased ("sich reduzieren" -> "reduce to") by 50-60% since the installation of approximately 500 surveillance cameras in basements and laundry facilities.
- Surveillance cameras can be of help in finding a thief who has stolen a bike from a basement.
- Surveillance by cameras have be helped helps to make sure that residents don’t litter in unauthorized places anymore.


2.
Surveillance cameras can avoid vandalism and consequently the cost of vandalism, too.
And so the installation of surveillance cameras pays off.


3.
The surveillance camera solution was installed by AC Sikring because of their extensive experience with similar installations for example installing surveillance cameras in several institutions and schools.


4.
Each surveillance camera is connected to a local server that stores the recording. For maximum security, the local server communicates automatically with a central server.
The recording can be viewed by authorized persons.
All what they are need to do this is a password and any PC to connect to the internet. They can simply can print the recordings on a picture or export them onto a DVD.


5.
It makes sense to install surveillance cameras on railway stations, because armed raids on people are increasing.
Other sensible places are on the motorway. This way the police can see a traffic jam (ganz wichtig: TRAFFIC JAM, sonst sieht die Polizei naemlich Marmelade ) on the motorway and can warn other drivers.
Furthermore, it makes it sense to install them in department stores to scare off wrongdoers.

Snake du musst dir bitte unbedingt die englische Grammatik ansehen, denn da liegen deine Hauptprobleme. Du springst in den Zeiten. Ausserdem tendierst du dazu statt Verben einfach die nachgeschlagenen Nomen zu verwenden.

Grüße
Duckduck