Englisch Report

[snoookie]

hey, wir haben als hausaufgabe einen kleinen englisch report auf, da ich in englishc aber nicht so fit bin, bite ich um ein paar tipps für die verbesserung . Wäre echt nett

Report about Christopher Primo

Christopher Primo is 19 years old and lives in Montana and likes reading fantasy books.
But Christopher isn’t a usually American boy.
Because when he was a young child, the parents teached him at home. Although he is an homeschooler. Specially is, that he get his high school diploma, when he was just 14, so it was four years ago than a normal American pupil.
When he was 15 he starts to plan and write his own fantasy trilogy, who calls “Dragon land”.
Lat year, he published the first book, it was very successfully. The second book was published last week and the third book should publish next year.
He gets the ideas for the trilogy from reading fantasy books, the setting for Dragon land from Montana and one of the characters of the book is based on his younger sister. But the rest of the characters come from his head.

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hey, wir haben als Hausaufgabe einen kleinen englischen Report auf, da ich in englisch aber nicht so fit bin, bitte ich um ein paar Tipps für die Verbesserung . Wäre echt nett!

Report about Christopher Primo

Christopher Primo is 19 years old, lives in Montana and likes reading fantasy books.
But Christopher is not a typical American boy, because when he was a young child his parents taught him at home. But although he was homeschooled, he got his high school diploma when he was only 14. And that made him special, because a normal American pupil gets it four years later, when they are 18.
When he was 15 he started to plan and write his own fantasy trilogy, called “Dragon land”.
Last year he published the first book, it was very successfully. The second book was released last week and the third book will be published next year.
He got the ideas for the trilogy from reading fantasy books, the setting for Dragon land from Montana and one of the characters of the book is based on his younger sister. But the rest of the characters are fictitious/his own invention.

Hi snoookie und willkommen im Forum!

Bitte achtest Du nächstes Mal auf Deine Rechtschreibung auch im Deutschen (bes. Groß- und Kleinschreibung!). Und als kleiner Tipp:
schaue auf unseren Grammatikseiten die Zeiten und ihre Verwendungen an und ich würde auch die Verwendung von Adverbien nochmal wiederholen.

Good luck says
Duckduck

[snoookie]

ok ;D danke, also im deutschen bin ich eig. recht gut aber ich merke es gerade doch das ich wohl wirklich mehr drauf achten sollt... *schäm*

aber viieeeelllen danke ;D