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hatschie

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:spin: Hallo miteinander, :spin:
dies ist nun mein 2 Versuch indem ich euch mal bitte über den Text zu schauen. Danke für eure Hilfe.

Capital London


London is the capital of the United Kingdom.
It is situated in Southeastern England along the Thames River.
The climate in London is generally mild and damp.


The weather is generally cloudy and foggy.


London has warmer Summers than most of the island.
In London there are a lot of shopping streets where you can enjoy a long shopping trip. There are about 30.000 stores and 26 street markets. The busy Oxford Street with more than 300 shopping malls is the centre of the “shopping paradise” of London.
Anhören
Umschrift
Attractions
The Tower of London was first a castle, later a prison and is now a museum where you can see the Crown Jewels.
Tower Bridge is the most famous bridge across the River Thames.
It can also open when big ship has to go up- or downstream.
The Queen (Elisabeth II) lives in Buckingham Palace.
St. Paul's Cathedral was designed by Sir Christopher Wren.
Westminster Abbey is the place where the kings and queens are crowned.
The Houses of Parliament are on the River Thames next to the Clock Tower with Big Ben.
Hyde Park is a nice place for relaxing.
And to see and know everything, pulls himself to England and enjoy it.

Thank you and Bye.

joy

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hatschie hat geschrieben: :spin: Hallo miteinander, :spin:
dies ist nun mein 2 Versuch indem ich euch mal bitte über den Text zu schauen. Danke für eure Hilfe.

Capital London


London is the capital of England and the United Kingdom.
It is situated on the large island Great Britain in South-East(ern) England along the Thames River.
The climate in London is generally mild and damp, so the weather is usually cloudy and foggy.
London has warmer summers than most of the island.

In London there are many shopping streets where you can enjoy a long shopping trips. There are about 30.000 stores and 26 street markets. The busy Oxford Street with more than 300 shopping malls is the centre of the “shopping paradise” of London.
Anhören?
Umschrift?
Attractions
The Tower of London was first a castle, later a prison and is now a museum where you can see the Crown Jewels.
Tower Bridge is the most famous bridge across the River Thames.
It is a bascule bridge which can be opened when big ships has to go up- or downstream. (or: for the passage of ships)
The Queen (Elisabeth II) lives in Buckingham Palace.
St. Paul's Cathedral was designed by Sir Christopher Wren.
Westminster Abbey is the place where the kings and queens are crowned.
The Houses of Parliament are on the River Thames next to the Clock Tower with Big Ben.
Hyde Park is a nice place for relaxing.
And to see and get to know everything, pulls yourself together and go (oder einfach: just go..) to England and enjoy it.

Thank you and Bye.

tiorthan

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joy hat geschrieben: It is a bascule bridge which can be opened when big ships have to go up- or downstream. (or: for the passage of ships)
Oder "when a big ship has to ...".

joy

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tiorthan hat geschrieben:
joy hat geschrieben:
It is a bascule bridge which can be opened when big ships have to go up- or downstream. (or: for the passage of ships)

Oder "when a big ship has to ...".




Oh ja tiorthan - Gut, hast du das gesehen! Vielen Dank!

hatschie

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Supi, ich freu mich sehr. :)

Danke für eure Großartige Hilfe! :prost: *auf euch* :freu: