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Bitte um Textkorektur (Kurzes Referat/ca. 400 Wörter)

Beitrag von cin0s »

Hi Leute,

ich musste in Englisch ein Referat machen. Morgen ist Abgabetermin und ich möchte, dass nochmal wer draufguckt der Ahnung von Englisch hat. Hier mal der Text:

ACϟDC



Music/Genres
AC/DC plays music like: Hard Rock, Rock and Roll, Bluesrock and Heavy Metal. There are many bands and
musicians which were influenced by AC/DC.

Logo
The band's logo was designed in 1977 by Gerard Huerta. It first appeared on the international version of “Let There Be Rock”.

Facts
AC/DC were founded at 31. December 1973. They sold all in all over 200 million records.
The record “Back in Black” is the second most sold record in the world. It was sold all in all over 42 million times. Only in the USA the record was sold over 21 million times.

Labels
Over the time AC/DC has got many different labels:
Albert
EMI
Columbia
Epic
Atlantic
Atco
Elektra
East West

Founding Members
The founding members of AC/DC are:
Singer:
Dave Evans
Lead-Guitar: Angus Young
Rhythm-Guitar: Malcolm Young
Bass: Larry Van Kriedt
Drum: Colin John Burges

Current Members
Current members of AC/DC are:
Singer:

Brian Johnson
Lead-Guitar: Angus Young
Rhythm-Guitar: Malcolm Young
Bass: Cliff Williams
Drum: Phil Rudd
The only members which were all the time in the band are Angus Young and his brother Malcolm Young.

The Band Name
The band name AC/DC (the english abbreviation for alternating current/direct current) were created following: The wife of George Young (he isn’t in the band) has seen the abbreviation on the backside of her sewing machine. She thought that this was a good name for the band.
The abbreviation should show the rough and powerful music of the band. In Australia the band is also known as “Acca Dacca”.


Important Albums
AC/DC has recorded over 24 albums. The most important albums of AC/DC are:

1976 High Voltage
1979 Highway to Hell
1980 Back in Black
2008 Black Ice

Cover Bands
There are many cover bands of AC/DC, but the most aren’t very famous.
Some AC/DC cover bands are:
Riff/Raff
Hells/Bells
High Voltage
Until now no cover band reached the popularity of AC/DC

Angus Young
On his Performances he often wears school uniforms. Magret Young has got this idea. Angus has got many school uniforms in many different colours. All are custom-made.
Another special thing is that he sometimes plays the guitar lying on the ground. On an early concert he stumbled over a wire and plays lying on the ground. Sometimes he do that, too.
In the Past Angus wear a bag, in this bag there was one of the first Wireless-transmitter for an e-guitar, because it was so big.


Danke :)

cin0s


Ps.: Sind wahrscheinlich mehr als viele Fehler drin. Bin schlecht in Englisch :D

cin0s

Re: Bitte um Textkorektur (Kurzes Referat/ca. 400 Wörter)

Beitrag von cin0s »

Kann bitte jemnd die Namn am Anfang wegmachen? Ich kann meinen eigenen Beitrag nicht ändern :/

Keswick (Contributor)

Re: Bitte um Textkorektur (Kurzes Referat/ca. 400 Wörter)

Beitrag von Keswick (Contributor) »

cin0s hat geschrieben:Hi Leute,

ich musste in Englisch ein Referat machen. Morgen ist Abgabetermin und ich möchte, dass nochmal wer draufguckt der Ahnung von Englisch hat. Hier mal der Text:

ACϟDC

Music/Genres
AC/DC plays music like: Hard Rock, Rock and Roll, Bluesrock and Heavy Metal. There are many bands and
musicians which were influenced by AC/DC.

Logo
The band's logo was designed in 1977 by Gerard Huerta. It first appeared on the international version of “Let There Be Rock”.

Facts
AC/DC were founded on 31st December 1973. All in all they sold over 200 million records.
The record “Back in Black” is the second most sold record in the world. All in all it was sold over 42 million times. In the USA alone the record was sold over 21 million times.

Labels
Over the time AC/DC was signed under many different labels:
Albert
EMI
Columbia
Epic
Atlantic
Atco
Elektra
East West

Founding Members
The founding members of AC/DC are:
Singer:
Dave Evans
Lead-Guitar: Angus Young
Rhythm-Guitar: Malcolm Young
Bass: Larry Van Kriedt
Drum: Colin John Burges

Current Members
Current members of AC/DC are:
Singer:

Brian Johnson
Lead-Guitar: Angus Young
Rhythm-Guitar: Malcolm Young
Bass: Cliff Williams
Drum: Phil Rudd
The only two founding members who are currently still in the band are Angus Young and his brother Malcolm Young.

The Band Name
The band name AC/DC (the english abbreviation for alternating current/direct current) were created as follows: The wife of George Young (he is not a band member) saw the abbreviation on the backside of her sewing machine. She thought that this was a good name for the band.
The abbreviation is meant show the rough and powerful music of the band. In Australia the band is also known as “Acca Dacca”.


Important Albums
AC/DC has recorded over 24 albums. The most important albums of AC/DC are:

1976 High Voltage
1979 Highway to Hell
1980 Back in Black
2008 Black Ice

Cover Bands
There are many cover bands of AC/DC, but most of them aren’t very famous.
Some AC/DC cover bands are:
Riff/Raff
Hells/Bells
High Voltage
Until now no cover band reached the popularity of AC/DC

Angus Young
He often wears school uniforms during his performances. Magret Young had the idea for this. Angus has got many school uniforms in many different colours. All are custom-made.
Another special thing is that he sometimes plays the guitar while lying on the ground. During an earlier concert he stumbled over a wire but kept playing while lying on the ground. He still does that sometimes. In the past Angus used to wear a bag. He used to keep one of the first wireless-transmitters for an e-guitar in that bag, simply because it was so big.


Danke :)

cin0s


Ps.: Sind wahrscheinlich mehr als viele Fehler drin. Bin schlecht in Englisch :D


AC/DC rocks und ich habe wieder was gelernt. Schoener Text, aber achte auf deine Zeiten.

Keswick (Contributor)

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Beitrag von Keswick (Contributor) »

Welche Namen?

cin0s

Re: Bitte um Textkorektur (Kurzes Referat/ca. 400 Wörter)

Beitrag von cin0s »

Danke für die Korrektur :D
Mit den Zeiten hab ichs wirklich nicht so...
Die Namen direkt in der zweiten Zeile vom Text...

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Re: Bitte um Textkorektur (Kurzes Referat/ca. 400 Wörter)

Beitrag von George »

Hi,
ich habe die Namen entfernt.

CU
George
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