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Kristina1992

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Religion in Brave New World

Instead of religion there enter a worship cult to the automobile manufactures Henry Ford. Important personalities are addressed as “Fordship”. Symbol of the cult is the letter T, in memory of the Model T, produced by the Ford-group and also according to the Christian cross, which was changed into a T.
Another special feature of the Ford-cult is the worship of Sigmund Freud, the founder of psychoanalysis. From the often used phrase “Oh, God” became the exclamation “Oh,Ford” or “Oh, Freud”.
An institution called “Solidarity Service” is a place, where a kind of worship with singing and dancing celebrated, that ends taking much soma and have orgy.
Utopia now revolves a religion of drugs and .
Instead of Sunday church, members now taught in the belief of hallucinations produced by a substance known as “soma”.
Mustapha Mond explained John, that they do not need a god, in a world where nobody is threatened by age, disease, distress, loneliness and change.

In the reservation the inhabitants , in contrast to all the other residents of “civilized world”, believe in religion, family and other human values that have been intentional forgotten in the new world.

tiorthan

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Der Text ist zum Teil unverständlich, um den zu korrigieren würde ich eine Übersetzung benötigen.

Duckduck (Contributor)

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Kristina1992 hat geschrieben:
Hi Kristina, mit ein bisschen guten Willen geht's auch so!

Religion in "Brave New World"

Religion has been replaced by a cult of the automobile manufacturer Henry Ford. As a consequence, important personalities are addressed as “Fordship”. The letter T is used as the symbol of this cult, commemorationg, on the one hand, the Model T, the first automobile produced by the Ford-group. But on the other hand its form resembles the cross, a typical Christian religious sign.
Another special feature of the Ford-cult is the worship of Sigmund Freud, the father of psychoanalysis. The exclamation “Oh, God” - often used in former times - has been changed to “Oh, Ford” or “Oh, Freud”.

Instead of Sunday church, members are now taught to believe in hallucinations produced by a substance known as “soma”. They attend the so-called “Solidarity Service”, where a kind of worship with singing and dancing is held. This regularly ends in taking soma and an orgy.
Utopia has replaced religion by a cult of drugs and lust (Dein eigentlich gemeintes Wort wird hier rausgefiltert, aber dieses ginge auch).

Mustapha Mond tells John, that nobody needs God in a world without the threats of age, disease, distress, loneliness and change.

But while most of the human values have been intentionally forgotten in the new world, the inhabitants of the reservation still believe in them: religion, family and many others.
Gut gemacht! Weiter so!

Denke daran: Passiv wird gebildet mit einer Form von "be" und der dritten Stammform.

Grüße
Duckduck

Kristina1992

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ohhh Dankeschön dieses forum und du sein einfach superrr... =D