Unemployed, pleas correct it (:

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Unemployed

Over 3,24 million people in germany are without a job. There are different kinds of aspects, why they do not find a good job. For example they are too old, not qualificated or they have an illness. It also could be, that they have no possibility to drive to the job.
This people have to live very limited and their self- esteem is ruffled. After you became
jobless you will get dole. Later you only get Hartz IV. Then the life will become much
stronger. It is very difficult to live healthy and comfortable, because you can not pay everything what you need. For example : a bred for toasting is much cheaper than a brown bread.
Specially the kids are afflicted with the poorness. They can not go in the swimming bath every day or allways have the newest cloth.
All in all I hope, that I never become jobless and that the jobless people will find a place to work.

Danke im Vorraus

MfG deathman2912

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Unemployed

Over 3,24 million people in Germany are without a job. There are different kinds of aspects (od. various / several / many reasons), why they do not find a good job. For example they are too old, not qualified or they have an illness. It also could be, that they have no means of transport to get to work.

These people have to lead a very restricted life and their self-esteem is low. If you are jobless / unemployment you will be on the dole. Later you only get Hartz IV. Then life will become much harder. It is very difficult to lead a healthy and comfortable life, because you cannot pay everything what you need. For example: a bread for toasting is much cheaper than a brown bread. (Ist es nicht umgekehrt?) Especially the kids are affected by the poorness / poverty. They cannot enjoy the swimming bath (od.: go swimming) every day or always wear the newest clothes (cloth = material used to make clothes).
All in all I hope that I never become jobless and that the jobless people will find a place to work.

Danke im Vorraus

MfG deathman2912

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Hallo Beide!

Schöner Text, prima Korrektur! Ich pfusche mal nicht darin herum, lasse alles so wie es ist, aber folgenden Hinweis möchte ich los werden:

Im Englischen wird bei Dezimalzahlen nicht das Komma, sondern ein Punkt verwendet, also

deutsch: 3,24 -> gesprochen: drei Komma zwei vier

englisch: 3.24 -> gesprochen: three point two four

Und um die Umdrehung voll zu machen, verwendet das Englische zwischen den Nullen hoher Zahlen Kommas anstelle von Punkten wie im Deutschen, also:

deutsch: 1.000.000.000

englisch: 1,000,000,000

Grüße
Duckduck

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Danke Duckduck für die genaue Erklärung