Bewerbung FSJ im Ausland

[Rebell91]

Hey liebe Community,
meine Freundin will sich für ein FSJ im Ausland bewerben und hat folgendes verfasst:

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is xyz. I am nineteen years old and I will get my higher education entrance qualification next year (May 2011). I am full of life and enjoy meeting friends. My favourite hobby is going climbing and hiking.

Since for years I take part at the school project „Pupils help pupils, in which I give tuition to younger pupils. There I have leaned to respond to children and to explain them difficult school stuff.

Moreover I was exercised as mediator since the seven grade of school. So I leaned to become accepted of my follow-men, to carter to problems and to find acceptable resolution for all involved parties.


Furthermore I work as babysitter since I am thirteen years old by neighbours and acquaintances.

After I conserve my higher education entrance qualification I want to get involved with social work before I start my study at the university. I like to gain new experiences for my further life and insights into different life situations of my fellow-men. Moreover I like to help and support people. Furthermore I hope that will further my personal development and become more independent by doing a voluntary gap year. I also want to learn an other foreign language.

How you see I especially have gained experiences in contact to children and youth, but not to elderly. However exactly these is the reason why I want to take part in the project, which works with older people. I think that I can learn important and interesting things of the people, who have much experience of life. Furthermore I want to show the elderly that they are a part of our community even if they aren‘t able to support the society.
I inform me about the project at the internet. So I see that the „Re Carto Alberto Refuge“ is located in a beautiful area. Also the description of the project seems attractive to me. I also think that I am able to cope with the activities which are assigned to the volunteers. Moreover I see that you offer the volunteers a participation of a language course. Indeed I want to learn Italian at home after I get my higher education entrance qualification but even so I would use the offer and will take part at the course.

Sincerely Yours,

xyz

Wäre schön, wenn ihr ihn euch mal durchlesen könnt und Verbesserungsvorschläge abgeben könntet!
LG,
Stefan

[joy]

Hey liebe Community,
meine Freundin will sich für ein FSJ im Ausland bewerben und hat folgendes verfasst:

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is . I am nineteen years old and I will get my higher education entrance qualification next year (May 2011). I am full of life and enjoy meeting friends. My favourite hobbies are climbing and hiking.

I have taken part at the school project „Pupils help pupils for years, in which I give tuition to younger pupils. There I have learned to respond to children and to assist them with difficult school matters.

Moreover I have exercised as mediator since the seven grade of school. So I learned how to become accepted by my follow-men, to be able to care for their problems and to find acceptable resolution for all involved parties.
Furthermore I have worked as a babysitter since I was thirteen years old for neighbours and acquaintances.
After my higher education entrance qualification I want / wish to get involved with social work before starting my study at the university. I like to gain new experiences for my future life and insights into different life situations of my fellow-men. Moreover I like to help and support people. I hope that doing a voluntary gap year would further my personal development and independence. I also want / wish to learn another foreign language.

As you can see I especially have gained experiences in contact to children and youngsters, but not to elderly. However exactly this is the reason why I want to take part in the project, which works with older people. I think that I can learn important and interesting things of the people, who have much experience of life. Furthermore I want to show the elderly that they are a part of our community although they are no longer able to support the society.
I inform me about the project at the internet. So On the internet I could see that the „Re Carto Alberto Refuge“ is located in a beautiful area. Also the description of the project seems attractive to me. I also think that I am able to cope with the activities which are assigned to the volunteers. Moreover I was interested to see that you offer the volunteers a participation of a language course. Indeed I want to learn Italian at home after my higher education entrance qualification but even so I would very much like to use your offer and take part at the course.

Sincerely Yours,

Wäre schön, wenn ihr ihn euch mal durchlesen könnt und Verbesserungsvorschläge abgeben könntet!
LG,
Stefan

Nicht vergessen, eine Betreffzeile zu machen, dass man gerade sieht, um was es geht. Und dass du dich darum bewerbst und teilnehmen möchtest, würde ich ganz am Anfang schreiben.
Grüsse
Joy

[Rebell91]

Alles klar,
Dankeschön!!