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[kiro55]

Guten Tag,


könntet ihr mir bitte helfen diese kurze Einleitung zu verbessern.

The newspaper article "Students Protest over education cuts" is about demonstration against the govermentent's written by Moya Irvine published in the newspaper "Read on" in January 2011. The Article deals with university students and school pupils across London, who took to the streets in protest against the goverment's planned education cuts.

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MfG

[Delfino]

The newspaper article "Students protest over education cuts" is about the demonstrations against the govermentent's plans, was written by Moya Irvine and published in the newspaper "Read on" in January 2011.
The article deals with university students and school pupils across London, who took to the streets in protest against the planned cuts in the education budget by the goverment.

The newspaper article "Students protest over education cuts" was written by Moya Irvine and published in the newspaper "Read on" in January 2011.
This article focuses on the demonstrations of university students and school pupils across London.
They all took to the streets in protest against the planned cuts in the education budget by the current goverment.

[Duckduck (Contributor)]

Sehr gute Bearbeitung, Delfino.
Ein kleiner OOPS jedoch ist Dir entwischt:

...by the current government.

Grüße
Duckduck

[kiro55]

Dankeschön