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Tim_1984_paris

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Könnte bitte jemand so nett sein und Text korrekturlesen

Hi Andreas, I have seen your call yesterday.
Since I have informed all the lovers of xyz, my phone rang the whole day yes and decided to switch it off.
I do not feel like to have more contact to them and talk with them over how many times you, they and I have met her.
The only thing I say to you is, My name is Tim, 26 years old, come from France, study international Business at MIRBIS in Moscow, had a close and intense relationship to Ludy for 3 months, but now it is over since yes.
I give you a last advice, before you think of giving a last chance. Look at this website, where she still active search for men till 49 and her last login was dated on 14. 01.2011. Do you really think, this girl loves us, when she do things like this at the same time??

Thanks for your consideration, but now I do not like to have more contact neither to you nor her.

Duckduck (Contributor)

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Tim_1984_paris hat geschrieben:Könnte bitte jemand so nett sein und Text korrekturlesen

Hi Tim und willkommen im Forum! :)

Hi Andreas,

I have only just noticed your call.
Ever since having informed all ...'s lovers, my phone would not stop ringing and I decided to switch it off.
I do not feel like having anything more to do with them, nor yet talking about how often you, they or I met her.
Let me just tell you:
My name is Tim, I am 26 years old and come from France, I studied International Business at MIRBIS in Moscow and I had a close and intense relationship to Ludy for 3 months, but I broke it up yesterday.
I give you a last advice, before you think of giving her a last chance, take a look at this website, where she is still actively searching for men up to 49 years. Her last login was dated on 14 January, 2011. Do you really think this girl loves us, when she does things like these at the same time??

Thanks for your consideration, but now I prefer breaking off contact both with you and her.
Wow, Geschichten, die das Leben schreibt...


Grüße

Duckduck